Level 1.7: Space - Participants' Works

April 11, 2022

 Before & After



                    Please accept my revisions. 
I increased the mass on both sides.  I thinned my branches. I added a complementary leaf at a different angle from the leaf in the right. 
I should have taken notes!  Thank you so much for offering these wonderful classes!








Hello...Thank You for our session on "space".  Here is my revised arrangement hopefully incorporating what I can remember of your suggestions of removing the yellow ranunculus and changing the number and position of the tulips.  I opened up the three tulips to create a bolder statement.  I like how the yellow centers of the tulips compliment the little stripes of yellow on the iris. Thank You.




Please see attached my ikebana with changes made following the lesson.

Flowers:
- Royal Cape
- Milkwort 

Changes:
- Bigger gap between oases 
- Lower mass of blue flowers
- Tall crossing blue flower over gap
- Trim leaves
- Tighter/stronger base of flowers
- Add some more blue flowers

My changes:
- Messier arrangement of blue flowers like the painting :)

Thankyou


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